Sunday, October 12, 2014

Literature Analysis: Broken For You- Stephanie Kallos



      
 


1.       The exposition of the story revealed the glory of Margaret's household,  her demeanor, and her newfound illness. The story takes place in Seattle, Washington during present times in a very large house filled with ornate antiques. I would say the rising action was when Margaret took in her first boarder, Wanda, because that's when she began making changes to her life. The climax took place when Wanda was hit by the car and had to suffer through a long recovery which in the beginning meant contemplating suicide. Margaret gave her the task of breaking all of the things in the house and creating mosaics from them. The falling action is defined by Margaret's death. The resolution described Wanda and her father finally reuniting. Also, Wanda and Troy became a couple.  Susan and the chef had a baby.

2.       My understanding of the theme of Broken For You is that sometimes we don't know what we want. Sometimes what we want is right in front of us but we're too blinded to see this by what we think we want. Wanda spent years chasing after Peter while Troy desperately tried to please her. In the end Wanda finally found Peter and discovered that she didn't want him, she loved Troy. Wanda and Troy ended up getting married. Another example may be that MJ left his daughter, Wanda, to chase after his wife for twenty-seven years before he accidentally found Wanda and realized he's been  chasing her the whole time.

3.        Stephanie Kallos conveys a tone of awkward normality. For example, on page 136 after Margaret and Wanda broke their first object, the narrator simply puts, "They stood quiet for a moment. Their goggles were foggy. They looked like two explorers adrift on an exotic arctic sea.", she illustrates how after this moment of bonding and outbreak of emotions that neither character knows how to express that; many readers can relate.  On page 262 it reads, "Not for the first time, she wished she hadn't come.",  this was describing the feeling Wanda had sitting at the art gallery. Wanda clearly feels awkward and ridiculous, even regretful. On page 335, "Margaret closed her eyes and listened. Her mother held her hand. Daniel snuggled up next to her and drove his race car, quietly.", This piece is reflecting upon Margaret's hallucinations of her mother and son. It creates a calm, melancholy scene. I think the tone is all about reality and how melancholy it can be some times.

4.        1st Edition

Stephanie Kallos uses foreshadowing to keep the reader involved. On page 170, when Wanda was hit by the car and the reader figured out that her father was there and not Peter, The inference came that Wanda and her father were going to be together in the end once again. Kallos also used Appeal to Pathos a lot to make a connection between the reader and the characters. On page 71, Margaret's dreams are described and this gives the reader a sense of what a tortured soul she is. She also uses Appeal to Logos so that the reader knows how tough their situation is. On page 160, when Margaret takes in a boarder who is a nurse it is pretty much the only logical thing a character has done which creates the realization of what chaos the characters live in. Flashback is also used quite often. Throughout the novel, all characters reflect back to their broken past which tells the reader how they became whom they are. Also, Appeal to ethos is used on page 242 when Margaret explains to Wanda her project. Once Margaret found out what her father had done and that there was no way she could reconnect all the objects with their Owner's descendants; they figured out a way to create a legacy.

5.        Kallos uses direct characterization when describing Wanda as "small" and "petite". She uses indirect characterization when Wanda showed up at Margaret's door and told her a major event that had happened in her life frantically; it shows what a mess Wanda was. She also uses direct characterization when she narrated that Margaret felt "stupid" and "embarrassed" when speaking to Wanda about her play. She uses indirect characterization when she wrote about the event in which Margaret offered Wanda, a stranger at the time, her car. This shows how Margaret desperately wants to please but has simply forgotten. Kallos using both these techniques shows the reader how other characters see this one, and how this one sees him or herself. It also shows the surface of their meaning compared to their deeper meanings.

6.        The author's diction changes when he focuses on different characters. When he focuses on Wanda the diction is very melancholy and tragic, whereas if he focuses on Margaret the diction is more awkward and free.

7.       I've determined that the protagonist is Wanda. Wanda is a very dynamic and round character. She is dynamic because in the beginning she is quite an odd girl who shows up at Margaret's door and proceeds to cry in her bathroom. One may think she's insane because she dresses in disguise to hunt her ex-boyfriend. Throughout the plot she begins to care more deeply about Margaret and the other boarders and less about Peter, her ex-boyfriend, and her work as a Stage Manager. By the end, she has completely forgotten of Peter, quit her job, and found her passion and her mind.

8.       After reading the book I felt like I had met the person. I knew Wanda and Margaret and through their obstacles I felt so involved with the story. At one point in the book, it narrated speaking to the reader. Telling the reader to imagine themselves in this situation that was described as later recognized as a scene in which one of the characters went through. You were drawn into the thoughts and soul of each character.

      

Sunday, October 5, 2014

Character Study: Selah Part 1

Spilling her fourth cup of coffee all over her taught, rosy, pencil skirt; Selah began barking orders to her inferiors while the whole studio was panicked with deadline anxiety. Three months ago Selah had gone from being a punctual intern to superior in the Moxie magazine studio. She was blessedly promoted after a hectic performance of her value. This valiant tale began with an acceptance letter and beautiful scholarship arriving at her humble home in Santa Maria.

She had applied to University of Washington four months prior to this unimpeachable omen. Her family was tight on money due to her father starting a new job after being fired from the former of thirty years, her mother also worked two part time jobs but it never seemed to be enough for them to live comfortably. The Western Exchange Program decided to reward her with enough scholarship money to allow her to afford this prestigious journalism college and the next fall she proceeded to move into her new dorm room. She was set up to major in English and pursue a career in journalism. After one quarter at UW Selah got an internship at a very high end magazine company, Moxie, stationed in the heart of Seattle. She had always designed the pages of her high School's magazine and she had loved it then, but only thought of it as a passionate hobby. She interned in Moxie's design studio and ended up killing it!

Selah was rewarded the opportunity of hiring a new intern since she was promoted; as luck would have it, she ended up meeting a very intriguing girl looking for a job to get back up on her feet. She had been mistakenly kidnapped and dropped in Seattle so Selah felt it very rewarding that she could help out. This girl proved to be a very great bonus to their team and relieved Selah of a lot of her stress. After only a short period this girl had to quit because she found adventure elsewhere. This, in turn, caused Selah's boss to grow angry and create a very unpleasant environment which finally pushed Selah into excepting a job elsewhere at a more intellectual magazine company.  

After only a few weeks at this new company Selah was in love. While still enrolled at UW, she signed a ten year contract overseeing design for this company and can feel the many adventures and travels awaiting in her future. Not many people can say they never work a day in their life because they don't see their job as an obligation, they see it as a passion. Selah sees her job as a passion, and she savors every waking second of it.

Thursday, September 25, 2014

Character Study

          As the wind howled and rustled the loose pine needles off the guarantor trees, fog twisting around the Christmas tree tops, Anne Elise focused her thoughts on what needed to be accomplished to make the first issue a masterpiece. Western Washington University's magazine was now passed down to a new generation of undergraduates figuring out their place in the world of journalism. She had been elected the head of the design team, being the most experienced with the software needed to create eye-capturing pages. The first few months of Anne's first year at Western were filled with unpacking boxes, getting to know the new state, buying a cozy wardrobe, and finally; putting her heart and soul into her passion: journalism. The passion for journalism was deep-rooted and sure, but the field in the study was undetermined. This being the case, she jumped in with what she knew best, to design.

Wednesday, September 17, 2014

Vocabulary Short Story

          A pretty young girl with much beatitude sat scraping gum from underneath the tables at the café where she worked, one may think a person cannot possibly have a heyday with this; she was. Becoming so lost in her day dreams, she hadn't noticed the gargantuan man studying her from his table. Once he found her up to his standards he waltzed over and the sycophant began trying to inveigle her into going on a date with him. He was very pretentious and couldn't help himself from hinting of his kudos won as a professional football player. Many woman would have truckled to his whims by now, but this certain young lady thought him to be a huge bête noire. She began to become fervid during his prolix speech and finally just turned her back on him and walked away. The man took great offense and bode her to marry a man the exact opposite as he was. Ecumenically, one would take this as a blessing. That night, after her tough day at work, the young lady had an incubus dream set in a dank, fetid room; she woke up in a sweat. At work the next morning she was a bit on edge, she had drank five cups of coffee just to stay awake. As she went to take a very uncomfortable looking man's order, he got up and bumped into her and sent her notebook flying. In the mist of his apology, he ran into total tautology and grew so immersed in her beauty he began blurting obsequious lagniappes. After everything subsided they conversed about him being a protégé for architecture and he showed her his prototype and explained the infrastructure. They got married and lived happily ever after!

My Masterpiece

I carry a huge passion for journalism. I've not quite decided what I'd like to pursue in journalism, I like everything about it and have tested the waters in everything from design to editing, I do know this is the field I want to pursue. I'd like to tie my masterpiece to this but I'm not quite sure how. I've thought about talking to some local newspapers to see if they could put one of m articles in or if I could take some photographs for them when needed. Another idea is to ask to intern at either a newspaper company or a magazine company. I have a dream, now I'm going to chase it.