Monday, February 23, 2015

Chapter one notes

The last pages of my prologue were heartwrenchingly torn out. 

"Rams wrapped in theremogene beget no lambs" ??

Page 5 last paragraph extremely long sentence. 
Much satirical undertone 

Page 7 repitition: "bud out of bud out of bud"
Restatement of the directors most arguable declarations as "notes"

Irony in the atmosphere and mood of the lab; cold and sterile and I humane. Yet the lab is to create as many human lives as possible, in the most inhumane way possible. 



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